Over today's session i started implementing my hall of fame pages into a working magazine draft, I'm very happy with how the opening page above developed and i think the background colour works well.
This is the second page in the hall of fame section, i edited some of the text and got the image from google, i think the page is good if a little wordy, i might add another picture but i don't want it running for 2 pages. overall it needs some improving but it looks pretty good.
This is a screenshot of the 3rd page of the hall of game section, I've clearly not really started making it but i wanted to include it so i could compare it in the next FMP report. When it is finished it will include my short review of the game transistor.
Yesterday i created the front cover of my magazine which is still in progress but i think its coming out well, it feels like the project is coming together.
As shown through the comparison above I've changed the page on difficulty in games in an attempt to make it less packed with text, this was at the request of the lecturer who also helpfully suggested i change the margin sizes.
In this comparison I've done something similar to what i showed above, in the newer page on the right I've moved the text into a new page and changed the margins to give the page more breathing room. I think this is a positive change and I'm glad my work is looking more professional.
This final page shows how I've moved all of the text from the previous examples into a new third page to conclude the series. I think this looks professional and the entire series of pages look better for these changes though they still need tweaking.
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